better. good eye, hugh.
> one small suggestion (in the name of simple language):
> change: "community of practice"
> to: "group" or a "network" or "a loose network"
>
> I'm not sure what a community of practice is, but it sounds scary, and
> makes me think, "oh, I don't belong here."
>
> I don't know about the corresponding French term.
>
> my 2 cents.
>
> hugh.
>
>
>
> Stephane Guidoin wrote:
> > We spent the last weeks to enhance the content of the wiki and the official
> > announcement.
> >
> > There are still some small things to be done but most of the work for the launch
> > is OK.
> >
> > I specifically bring to your attention, the following pages :
> > - The landing page :
http://civicaccess.ca/wiki/Launch/LandingPage (the content
> > of this page will be moved to
http://civicaccess.ca/ after your review)
> > - The home page of the wiki (
http://civicaccess.ca/wiki/FrontPage in english,
> >
http://civicaccess.ca/wiki/PageD%27Accueil in french).
> > - The official launch "letter" :
> >
http://civicaccess.ca/wiki/Launch/PublicAnnouncement> >
> > We also improved the graphical interface and the user experience. Please set the
> > "prefered theme" to "rightsidebar" in your preferences
> > (
http://civicaccess.ca/wiki/UserPreferences when logged in) if it's not already
> > the case. Then, you'll see some new navigation links in the top right panel.
> > This should help to find your way in the wiki. We'll try to improve while we
> > learn how to change the default template.
> >
> > Comments are welcome :)
> >
> > Note : Accessibility of the landing page has been changed but I'll work on that
> > after the week end. Concerning the wiki, it will be hard to make big
> > accessibility improvment on the short term.
> >
> > Stéphane
> >
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